Sunday, September 23, 2012

Close Reading (9/23)


http://www.washingtonpost.com/opinions/george-f-will-americas-voters-treated-like-children/2012/09/19/8d2f15e4-0277-11e2-8102-ebee9c66e190_story.html

Why Not Treat Voters Like Grown-Ups?

Diction: “In every year divisible by four, the dominant superstition of American politics—faith in the magic of presidential words and deeds…” The words dominant superstition and magic leads one to think of make believe. This is a form of satire because it shows the ridiculousness of the campaigns in how they go to extreme measures to support or oppose a given candidate. The word choice of narcissism in “…reaches an apogee that fees national narcissism…” gives insight into how we as Americans act. We feel that the president’s actions are attributed to everything happening in the world. This makes me wonder, are we concerned with the president’s policies? Or rather are we concerned with tearing down or building up the candidates?

Figurative language: “Romney called this the fruit of administration weakness…” In this quote, Romney’s use of the phrase “fruit of administration” is figurative language. The word fruit has a connotation of planting a seed, and nurturing the plant until it has grown and become stable to live on its own. When Romney paired fruit with administration he created an idea of Obama’s foreign policy being weak, thus enabling terrorist attacks. The administration is weak like a seed and allows for terrorist attacks to become bigger and more frequent like maturing fruit.

Imagery: When the author says, “It would require precise intellectual calipers to gauge which idea is silliest.” the choice of calipers brings to mind a precise measuring tool to measure a minute level of truth. This adds to the sarcasm of the editorial as the author opinionates how Romney and Obama argue over whose fault it was that the terrorists attacked us.

Diction: “None of the people involved-some cunning, some deranged—take their cues from utterances by America’s president.” The author chose the words cunning and deranged as means to describe the people involved in the attacks. This strengthens the author’s opinion that the real cause of the attacks is not the failed foreign policy, nor is it the video, instead it stems from power struggles.

Imagery: “Childlike credulity about the presidents’ abilities to subdue turbulent portions of the world by projecting “strength,” or to “manage” the domestic economy, encourages political infantilism.” Tying Americans’ thought process of how if we are strong as a nation then the world will be filled with peace to a childlike credulity creates and image in the reader mind of a simple minded individual without keen intellect powers. While reading this I found myself asking why are we so simple minded? Perhaps it is because it requires too much thought and will provide truth that we care not to know.

Figurative Language: The word erogenous is expanded on by the phrases “’which presidential candidate “would you prefer to have take care of you if you were sick” and which “would you rather invite to dinner at your home”’. The public follows their feelings not rational thought.

Imagery: ‘“Tell me you trouble,” urged President Franklin Roosevelt in a broadcast fireside chat. But the idea of the president as consoler in chief and mast of the bedside manner was unique to FDR...”’ This paints a picture in my head of a grandfather sitting next to me and reading a book to me in bed. However, FDR was no grandfather, he was an aristocrat. Furthering this idea the reader is asked to “imagine, if you can, wanting Dwight Eisenhower at your bedside.” The idea is absurd; the image created is based on false pretenses to appeal to the public. The author is again saying that the people are responding in a childlike manner to candidates.

Diction: “Someday, someone is going to seek the presidency by demystifying it. Many voters will be astonished by, and even be grateful for, the novelty of being addressed as adults”. The word demystifying connects back to the beginning of the article when the author says the presidency is magical. He shows that there is nothing magical about the presidency in fact it is just how we perceive what the president is capable of doing abroad and at home.

4 comments:

  1. The way that you set up you blog is slightly confusing to me. Though it's nice to know exactly what I'm going to read about, I am not sure that this is the correct format of the blog. I am not sure though, my blog was in an essay format... Also when talking about diction, remember that it is one word! In you first paragraph you have one example that has two words "dominant superstition". But I really liked that example and how you tied it to the form of make believe. Which seems very common when talking about politics =). Your second example in your first paragraph was a little confusing to me. I couldn't quite grasp the point that you were trying to make with the example. I really like you second paragraph, this is a great explanation!! In paragraphs 3 and 4, I am having trouble understanding how you are coming to these conclusions. Perhaps you're not explaining them fully or I am just missing something. But I feel like more information needs to be added there. Your second sections of imagery and figurative language don't seem to provide the element that you are trying to show. Not only do you not explain how it shows the element, the quotes themselves (esp. the figurative language) were hard to connect with the ideas. Overall, this piece is more of your opinions of what the article says. It doesn't really show HOW the techniques and elements help convey the author's point.

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  2. Sorry about the structure of this I was confused by how it should be, so if anyone has a question about it you can just ask me. Sorry!

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  3. Yes, the instructions weren't clear on what format to use but if you ever have to edit this I would put all of your diction examples together and do the same for imagery and figurative language to keep the reader on track with your ideas. For each example, you made sure to explain what you think each of your examples means, however, the assignment asked how the techniques create effects and meaning as a whole. Therefore all of your examples of technique should all point to the same meaning. For example you wrote about imagery, "the choice of calipers brings to mind a precise measuring tool to measure a minute level of truth," so how does this image support the meaning of the whole article? And how do your other examples of diction, imagery, and figurative language lead to and support this same meaning? Overall, I think you analyzed each specific example instead of analyzing the techniques to find the article's meaning. Besides this misunderstanding, you made some interesting points and a few confusing ones (which Gabriella pointed out), but I think all of you examples could use more clarity on exactly what the author wanted to say through his diction, imagery, and figurative language.

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  4. Like they said before me, consolidate your paragraphs.
    I don't feel like the choice of the word "narcissism" was very important. The alliteration might serve to trivialize Americans' thoughts and mock our self-centeredness, but your explanation of its importance is basically just a summary of the first two paragraphs of the article. And alliteration isn't diction anyway.

    I see what you mean with the seed analogy, but I feel like you could still make your explanation more clear. You may be able to merge your last two sentences in that paragraph and reword things for better clarity.

    I like your last paragraph, and how you connect the diction to the diction at the beginning of the article. Nice catch.

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